frozen adventure

My literacy class made restricted story's, with two to three similes and metaphors.I have 5 similes and 3 metaphors try to spot them. This is my story.

 Leaving the base I see the sun shining super bright blinding me like a giant torch. the mountains are teeth they are a dreadful menace.The ice was melting so fast It made a waterfall. Downing animals, as I look I could see a family of polar bear rolling down the mountain very fast.

I walked up the mountain i was a human Popsicle I was getting very excited it was my first time walking up a dangerous snowy mountain.I ran super fast Just for fun  then suddenly I slipped over a big fat ugly rock and rolled down as fast as a cheater, I got back up and realized that was a silly idea.I decided in sadness to walked down the mountain slowly to have a rest.Finally i got to the bottom of the mountain. The sun got 1 billion more times brighter. My eyes were melting. I wish I bring sunglasses.


The polar bear are stuck in snow wanted to help them so I called in the helicopter, on the wally talky I can only call them two times one for pick up and one for emergency. The helicopter grabbed the three polar bears with giant tiger claws. The pilot shouted they were as heavy as a Elephant. He put them into a better place,so they won't get stuck in ice again,I shouted in the wally talky “do you have any sunglasses” “yes I do actually” “why”

“Oh so I can climb up this mountain with out the sun getting into my eyes” I said I was hoping he would say yes. “Yes sure Borrow mine” He chucked them down the helicopter and landed strait in his hands “wow thanks” as he put them on He thought that was amazing! “you welcome” he said The helicopter zoomed into the sky like a laser beam. I guess I will walk up this snowy horrid mountain...