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Friday, November 8, 2019

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 April 3am “it's time for church ben yelled got to go as he said,talking to himself ben ran opened the door.

”He walked to his friends house it took around  30minits to get his friends house. Bang bang bang as I knock on the door, I was very nervous but he wasn't there.

I thought that's strange he doesn't normally do that.so I decided to walk to church myself...He finally got there.ben looked at his watch “oh no, he shouted “im late.He opened the door the door sketched, the church wasn't normal as usual it was old,damp,smelly and broken knowone was there.

There was just melting candles I thought that was very strange THIS CHURCH IS KAOS! Why did my friends tell me to come to this church at 3am this doesn't make any sense “the church is soundless”.I saw big red fat balloons everywhere.I got so scared I felt so unsettled in this place I ran away to get back home,I heard laughing nousis it was creepy.I looked behind me and saw a clown
 “AHHHHHHHHHH!”
The clown was dashing through the wind like a cheater  it was wild,it felt like a dream but it was legit.I was petrified.
 my heart was pounding,I ran and ran and  didn't look back. Then after awhile I got so tired and I stopped my house. I felt like a dead rat.I started to open the door knob slowly so I dont wake my parents up.But then

 I heard a whisper and there was nothing there....BOO!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT THE HECK YOU GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK

 “it's a prank” jack puffed  and his friends shouted “APRIL FOOLS”!!!! 
“oh that's why”
 “it was a very good prank but don't do that next time ok” mumbled ben “ok” said jack
 “I didn't like it” ben mumbled
 “So who was the clown”? 

“Oh” gorge was. See look jack pointed at gorge with his dirty fingers.

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