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 April 3am “it's time for church ben yelled got to go as he said,talking to himself ben ran opened the door.

”He walked to his friends house it took around  30minits to get his friends house. Bang bang bang as I knock on the door, I was very nervous but he wasn't there.

I thought that's strange he doesn't normally do that.so I decided to walk to church myself...He finally got there.ben looked at his watch “oh no, he shouted “im late.He opened the door the door sketched, the church wasn't normal as usual it was old,damp,smelly and broken knowone was there.

There was just melting candles I thought that was very strange THIS CHURCH IS KAOS! Why did my friends tell me to come to this church at 3am this doesn't make any sense “the church is soundless”.I saw big red fat balloons everywhere.I got so scared I felt so unsettled in this place I ran away to get back home,I heard laughing nousis it was creepy.I looked behind me and saw a clown

 “AHHHHHHHHHH!”

The clown was dashing through the wind like a cheater  it was wild,it felt like a dream but it was legit.I was petrified.

 my heart was pounding,I ran and ran and  didn't look back. Then after awhile I got so tired and I stopped my house. I felt like a dead rat.I started to open the door knob slowly so I dont wake my parents up.But then

 I heard a whisper and there was nothing there....BOO!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT THE HECK YOU GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK

 “it's a prank” jack puffed  and his friends shouted “APRIL FOOLS”!!!! 

“oh that's why”

 “it was a very good prank but don't do that next time ok” mumbled ben “ok” said jack

 “I didn't like it” ben mumbled

 “So who was the clown”? 

“Oh” gorge was. See look jack pointed at gorge with his dirty fingers.

My debate topic

 My literacy group did a debate. My debate is aliens probably exists I still haven't edited it yet. It has some copied and pasted sentences. I will update it.


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I want to believe aliens probably exists somewhere.  We are going to look at what life needs to live, the habitable zone, when and where life could be found, and who is searching for life. We should probably start our journey looking at planets that support life. 

There are some planets with toxic gases.We probably won't find life.

Some planets have tens of thousands of times more carbon dioxide than earth has its known to be toxic to humans and animals and life on earth.

Life can be in places but they aren't so complex creatures like animals there called single celled microbes.

There are billions of suns out there.and water can be found on most planets and there are so many planets in space.There is a big chance of other life

What do we need to live Life needs: Life on Earth uses only two types of energy for metabolism: sunlight and redox chemistry you at least have enough light to support photosynthesis. So you have the right temperature, water, gravity,an apnosphar and sunlight.

Another one of the new planets, called Kepler-442b, has a 97 percent chance of being in the habitable zone, and though it's a bit bigger  with a diameter one-third larger than Earth's it has an estimated 60 percent chance of being rocky here is a picture of it.

When could we possibly find life 

Mabe Mars? NASA is inviting people around the world to submit their names to fly aboard the life-hunting Mars 2020 rover, which is scheduled to launch next summer and touch down on the Red Planet in February 2021.

Who is searching for life on other planets

NASA Scientists claim the exoplanet if confirmed, could be a prime candidate to host alien life. On 18 April 2013, NASA announced the discovery of three new Earth-like exoplanets Kepler-62e, Kepler-62f, and Kepler-69c now confirmed.

 

cool animations

Isometric robot

In my math class we drew are own  isometric stuff I drew a robot. This is my small one and big one it was confusing and hard. I enjoyed this session.

Maori art

Today in my class we colored in Maori gods I piked this god because I like nature his name is tane Mahuta god of forest.

 

frozen adventure

My literacy class made restricted story's, with two to three similes and metaphors.I have 5 similes and 3 metaphors try to spot them. This is my story.

 Leaving the base I see the sun shining super bright blinding me like a giant torch. the mountains are teeth they are a dreadful menace.The ice was melting so fast It made a waterfall. Downing animals, as I look I could see a family of polar bear rolling down the mountain very fast.

I walked up the mountain i was a human Popsicle I was getting very excited it was my first time walking up a dangerous snowy mountain.I ran super fast Just for fun  then suddenly I slipped over a big fat ugly rock and rolled down as fast as a cheater, I got back up and realized that was a silly idea.I decided in sadness to walked down the mountain slowly to have a rest.Finally i got to the bottom of the mountain. The sun got 1 billion more times brighter. My eyes were melting. I wish I bring sunglasses.


The polar bear are stuck in snow wanted to help them so I called in the helicopter, on the wally talky I can only call them two times one for pick up and one for emergency. The helicopter grabbed the three polar bears with giant tiger claws. The pilot shouted they were as heavy as a Elephant. He put them into a better place,so they won't get stuck in ice again,I shouted in the wally talky “do you have any sunglasses” “yes I do actually” “why”

“Oh so I can climb up this mountain with out the sun getting into my eyes” I said I was hoping he would say yes. “Yes sure Borrow mine” He chucked them down the helicopter and landed strait in his hands “wow thanks” as he put them on He thought that was amazing! “you welcome” he said The helicopter zoomed into the sky like a laser beam. I guess I will walk up this snowy horrid mountain...

goal ladder

This is my goal ladder at Marshland school we made goal ladders this is my goal ladder.

For my reading i need to work out what words mean and increase my vocabulary and practice reading
at home.I need to push myself to read harder books.and understand books outside my comfort zone.

For my writing i need to Organize my ideas before writing.Then

add more interesting words like adjectives power verbs to make my writing more interesting.
I want my writing to make people laugh.

For my maths I need to understand more about factors and to get better at problem solving.